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Friday, July 17, 2009

Selected Essay Of UPPM 3

Hello guys,


I do have here an essay written by one of our students during the UPPM3. She is Afifah Fatini Bt Sulaiman from 6A1. Her essay deserves 14/15 marks. I am publishing it here so that each and everyone of you can read hers. Maybe her essay is not as good as others from other schools, but I believe for at least she has tried her utmost best to present a mature essay.


PAPER II QUESTION 3, UPPM 3
Helping A Fire Victim
Ain is a kind and helpful girl who often helps the needy. She would always ask for permission from her parents everytime she wants to help a person.
It so happened on one sunny afternoon when Ain was walking home with her family after visiting her grandparents. There saw a house was on fire. At the drop of a hat, Ain's father rushed into the house to rescue the people. As bad luck would have it, he only managed to rescue a girl. They then brought the girl home as the girl was crying bitterly. Ain's father called the fire brigade to help put out the fire.
At home, Ain suggested to her father that they should help the unfortunate girl and her family. The family made a consensus to help the poor girl.
The next day, Ain and her sister collected money and old used clothes from their neighbours. They went from house to house to collect them. They managed to collect plenty of used clothes.
Then, both of them walked home. They gave the items to their mother who then gave them to the poor girl. The girl who was down in the dumps was very happy to be given with the donations. Ain and her family were praised by the girl.
Ain was on cloud nine after helping the girl. The girl owed a debt of gratitude for Ain's good deed. Ain promised to help other people who are in trouble in the future. Her parents were also proud of her, as proud as a peacock to have a committed daughter who loves to help people.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

ayat afifah sedap

Anonymous said...

SYE TABIK DYE PUNYE AYAT,,
TPI KNAPE SKRG DIE DA MROSOT???
ANAK DIDIKMU..

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